Your class will be writing ONE group paragraph(s) for the story (not each student). The first class will write the intro paragraph(s). Then the next class will read the paragraph(s) and decide how they want to continue the story. This will continue until the last class on the list writes the ending and gives the story a title. Your paragraph(s) will be typed onto this Wiki page. You will also need to send (email as .jpg) the 3 pictures to your Teacher Leader. The pictures should illustrate events in the section that your class wrote.

Please visit the Instructions Page for more information.

Please add your information to the chart. This way your classes can "see" where the story is traveling and have a chance to actually "meet" some of the students who collaborate on their story.

Teacher Leader: Justine Hughes

Contact Information
Due Date
Check When Finished
Justine Hughes
and Talented Cluster
New Zealand
October 29
Completed :-)
Illustrations received
Meghan Early
Monocacy Elementary Center
Birdsboro, PA
November 5
Mrs. Cashman

November 12

Jennifer Rogowin
Westmoor Elementary School
Northbrook, Il.
November 19
Illustrations received
Isabella Wasaznik
Annunciation Catholic
Fullerton, California
December 3
X Finished

Title (Given by the last class):

Start your story here:

The mad scientist named Gordon, was working on his robot one day but then something suddenly went terribly wrong. Gordon didn't program it correctly because he hadn't studied hard enough, he'd had a bad day and... he'd LOST his instructions! The robot smashed through the wall of Gordon's science lab and ran out into the town where he spotted the chocolate factory. People were putting chocolate into the trucks to deliver to Buckingham Palace where a hairdresser was sitting outside under a shelter on a big brown chair. The hairdresser was doing the Queen's hair and the Queen had asked for some chocolate. (She was cheating on her diet). The robot ran after the truck to get some chocolate because he was a chocolate-eating robot. Gordon didn't want to hurt the environment so he made his robot a robot that runs on chocolate to keep him working.

While the delivery men are loading the chocolate, they don’t notice that Gordon’s robot, named Chocobot, gets into the truck and hides! The workers shut the door and start off to Buckingham Palace. Meanwhile, Chocobot is busy eating all the chocolate inside the truck. After he eats the chocolate, he goes into an empty chocolate box and hides. Chocobot ate 10 gigantically enormous boxes of chocolate, and becomes an evil, chocolate-eating robot! When the delivery men open the truck door at Buckingham Palace, they are shocked at what they see!

The delivery men saw an enormous robot eating their chocolate. It kept on doubling in size after each box of chocolate it ate. Then it jumped out and ran to kidnap the Queen. It grabbed the Queen and climbed on top of Buckingham Palace. The robot tied the Queen with a chocolate rope. Every second the rope got tighter and tighter. The Queen struggled to get free by gnawing at the rope with her teeth, but the rope became too hard. She had to give up. Next, the robot stated his ransom, “I will only give her back for a million chocolate boxes!” Gordon was coincidentally running by a TV store on his search to find Chocobot when he was saw the giant robot on the live news coverage!
When Gordon saw Chocobot on the news at the TV store, he could not believe what he saw, he didn’t know what to do and started to feel nervous. Surprised by the news, Gordon contacted his friend, Fred Vona, whom was part of the Royal Air Force a.ka. RAF and the two of them took a cab to Buckingham Palace to help the queen. When Gordon and Fred arrived at Buckingham Palace there was a lot of commotion, especially when a train, ship, truck and plane full of chocolate arrived. "Mama mia", said Gordon when he saw his robot. "Let the Queen go", he ordered from below, "your chocolate is here." Then Gordon tried and successfully reached the top of the enchanting palace. He taunted Chocobot with a chocolate bar. Chocobot said, “I will leave her alone if you promise to not arrest me and you give me my chocolate.” Chocobot let go of the Queen by biting the chocolate rope. At that moment the rest of the Royal Air Force arrived.