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Level** ||= **Location** ||= **Email** ||= **Skype** ||= **Twitter/Other Info** ||= **Due Date** ||= **Did you post your section of the story?** || (Class 10) ||= Berwick Lodge Primary School ||= 4 ||= Berwick, Victoria, Australia ||=  ||=   ||=   ||= March 20 ||= yes ||
 * = **Teacher** ||= **School** ||= **Grade
 * = Lois Smethurst
 * = Emily Dause ||= South Mountain Elementary ||= 4 ||= Dillsburg, PA, USA ||= edause@nycsd.k12.pa.us ||=  ||=   ||= March 27 ||= yes ||
 * = Debbie Cross ||= Jones ||= 4 ||= Asheville, NC USA ||=  ||=   ||=   ||= April 17 ||= yes ||
 * = Marjorie Hessler ||= Fairview Elementary ||= 4 ||= New Cumberland, PA, USA ||= mhessler@wssd.k12.pa.us ||= Hessler34 ||=  ||= April 23 ||=   ||
 * If you would like to share information about you: email address, Skype name, Twitter name, etc., please feel free to add it to the chart. Some teachers mentioned that they would like to actually "meet" some of the students that work on their story. **


 * Your class will be writing ONE group paragraph(s) for the story (not each student). The first class will write the intro paragraph(s). Then the next class will read the paragraph(s) and decide how they want to continue the story. This will continue until the last class on the list writes the ending and gives the story a title . Your paragraph(s) will be typed onto this Wiki page. You will also need to send (email as .jpg) the 3 pictures to me. The pictures should illustrate events in the section that your class wrote. Illustrations can be drawn and photographed or created using a computer program such as Kidpix.

Go to Instructions Page. **


 * Start your story here: **

Marshmallow Madness
“Come on! I’ve got my dad’s boat for today!!!”Said Mike. “Really!” Jane exclaimed. “Yeah!” “Well no way am I gunna ride on it!” “Why not Jane!!?” “Because my skin is all sensitive and what about my sea sickness? I don’t want to get wet! Also do you know that I REALLY HATE BOATS!!!! “Hey guys chill chill. Take a chill pill!” I said “It’s going to be really fun Jane. If you need medicines then take them. It’s not a big deal!” After we FINALLY got Jane on the boat she was as calm as anything. My friends and I were always on adventures together. There was Mike who is impulsive and also thinks he knows everything. Mike’s very fun to be with he’s very adventurous and daring. Mikes got dark blond spiky hair with shiny blue eyes almost the colour of the sky and he’s 10 years old.

Jane is very irritating and annoying but she is also very smart. She has orange curly hair and light green eyes Jane is 10 years old. Krissy is very, very smart and caring and loves adventures. She has blond hair and brown eyes and is 11 years old. “Where are we going today Mike?” I said. “Uhhhh, Ummmm, Im.......not so .....sure.” “Mike!” said Jane. Just as she was speaking a dark shadow came over them. “Mike have you got us in trouble!” croaked Jane. Suddenly the boat rocked and darted out of the way of something.

It was a chocolate tsunami! "Eek!” I cried. Jane screamed. Mike said, “Awesome!" Krissy yelled, “Eat for your lives! It’s the only way to survive!” We started gulping the chocolate as fast as we could. Suddenly, a Marshmallow Guy came out of a chocolate volcano and said, “Haha! You’re going to get fat eating all of this chocolate!” Jane said, “Who are you?!?!” Marshmallow Guy responded, “I’m Marshmallow Guy!” and then he ran away. Mike said, “Let’s eat the Marshmallow Guy! We can take him and dip him in the chocolate!” “That’s a good idea!” said Krissy. “He could absorb the chocolate!” “But Mike and Krissy,” I shrieked, “I’m allergic to marshmallows!” “Don’t worry, Chloe,” said Krissy, “we’ll eat it, so it won’t touch you." Out of the sky came a Flying Chocolate Man! “I’ll save you! I will let you use my chocolate mobile to go and get the Marshmallow Guy,” yelled the Chocolate Man. Unfortunately, it was a very sunny day, and the Chocolate Man suddenly melted. Jane fainted. “Hey, we still have his car keys. The chocolate mobile didn’t melt because of its sugar force-field. Let’s steal the chocolate mobile!” I suggested. “Let’s get in!” agreed Mike. We all got in the chocolate mobile. (We dragged Jane into the car with us). “Oh no,” said Krissy, “the chocolate mobile has a mini-marshmallow security system!” Tiny marshmallows began eating the car. “How are we going to catch the Marshmallow Guy now?!” I declared, as I jumped out of the car away from the tiny marshmallows.

The tiny little marshmallows ate the sugar force fields. "OH NOO! " Jane said and passed out again. The chocolate car started melting even more and fell in the chocolate lake. Then all of a sudden the Breakfast Team fell out of the sky. It was Pancake Man, Fruitman, Milkman, Omelet Man and Vitamin C Man. "Wow, a giant Pancake Man!" said Mike. Milkman exclaimed "Come with me to defeat the Marshmallow Man," so they went off the boat and found the cereal killer shoving cereal in people's mouths with Marshmallow Man. The Omelet Man squirted cheese on the cereal killer. Then Milkman started to squirt lumpy milk on Marshmallow Man, but Marshmallow man absorbed it and shot it back. Suddenly Mike jumped out and punched Marshmallow Man. His hand was stuck inside Marshmallow Man. Marshmallow man flew off with Mike.

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